audinece feedback

We got this feedback for a video a while ago, we asked them basic question like; "what do you like about the music video?" "What genre do you think it is?" and "do you have any improvements?" I do not think that this was very successful as we got very short answers that didn't really help us with what we can move forward with.  

Teacher assessment - general

A Level Media Progress Check - Kayleigh
	Assessed by		NSE - Teacher
Focus of assessment		General
Relevant assessment criteria		Planning and research evidence will be complete and detailed.
Evidence of progress/ evidence of meeting criteria		Amazing! Detailed and impressive show of how you are researching and planning for your next stages. Excellent ongoing use of web 2.0 tools. A very engaging and interactive blog. Keep up the excellent work.
Areas to work on next/ ideas to consider		Just be careful of a few spelling mistakes. Ensure you incorporate feedback into your production diary.
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Teacher assessment - website analysis

A Level Media Progress Check - Kayleigh
	Assessed by		NSE - Teacher
Focus of assessment		website analysis
Relevant assessment criteria		There is excellent research into similar products and a potential target audience.
Evidence of progress/ evidence of meeting criteria		Detailed look into what conventions are on a range of websites.
Areas to work on next/ ideas to consider		If you could consider how colour, image, layout are important and what it says to the audience for each one.
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Teacher assessment - audience questionnaire

A Level Media Progress Check - Kayleigh
	Assessed by		NSE - Teacher
Focus of assessment		audience questionnaire
Relevant assessment criteria		There is excellent research into similar products and a potential target audience.
Evidence of progress/ evidence of meeting criteria		You have another web 2.0 tool used well. You have reflected in detail on the questionnaire and considered its purpose.
Areas to work on next/ ideas to consider		If you could consider any targets or problems that this questionnaire threw up, for you to work on next.
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Teacher assessment - digipak recreation

A Level Media Progress Check - Kayleigh
	Assessed by		NSE - Teacher
Focus of assessment		Digipak recreation
Relevant assessment criteria		There is excellent research into similar products and a potential target audience.
Evidence of progress/ evidence of meeting criteria		You have reflected on each individual part of the digipak and considered what you have learnt as you went along.
Areas to work on next/ ideas to consider		Can you change some of the timings on the maker? It jumps ahead quite quickly at times. A shot of the whole digipak as one?
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Teacher assessment - digipak genre change

A Level Media Progress Check - Kayleigh
NSE - Teacher
Focus of assessment	Digipak genre change
Relevant assessment criteria	There is excellent research into similar products and a potential target audience
Evidence of progress/ evidence of meeting criteria	Lovely change of genre from the original digipak. You have clearly achieved this through colour and design.
Areas to work on next/ ideas to consider	When reflecting on your choices, could you be more specific about how this has enhanced your understanding of incorporating genre into your digipak design.
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Teacher assessment - conventions of alternative rock

A Level Media Progress Check - Kayleigh
	Assessed by		NSE - Teacher
Focus of assessment		Conventions of alternative rock
Relevant assessment criteria		There is excellent research into similar products and a potential target audience.
Evidence of progress/ evidence of meeting criteria		Very detailed look into a range of videos, considering mise-en-scene, editing and camera.
Areas to work on next/ ideas to consider		This is what the exam board would consider an 'essay on screen'. Is there any way of breaking it up with footage and/or images?
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Teacher assessment - music video pitch

A Level Media Progress Check - Kayleigh
	Assessed by		NSE - Teacher
Focus of assessment		Music video pitch
Relevant assessment criteria		There is excellent research into similar products and a potential target audience.
Evidence of progress/ evidence of meeting criteria		Detailed discussion into what song you are pitching for and why.
Areas to work on next/ ideas to consider		If you could identify audience feedback and how this has influenced your choices.
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Teacher Assessment - conventions of a music video

A Level Media Progress Check - Kayleigh
	Assessed by		NSE - Teacher
Focus of assessment		conventions of a music video
Relevant assessment criteria		There is excellent research into similar products and a potential target audience.
Evidence of progress/ evidence of meeting criteria		Detailed analysis into what makes up a video, using media language and considering different genres.
Areas to work on next/ ideas to consider		If you could include footage to exemplify your ideas.
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Teacher assessment - digipak analysis

A Level Media Progress Check - Kayleigh
	Assessed by		NSE - Teacher
Focus of assessment		digipak analysis
Relevant assessment criteria		There is excellent research into similar products and a potential target audience.
Evidence of progress/ evidence of meeting criteria		Excellent detail into different types of digipak and their purpose/effect. Clear consideration of how you might consider these elements for your own digipak. Good use of web 2.0 tool.
Areas to work on next/ ideas to consider		Double-check a few spelling errors. Final reflection on what this has taught you.
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Teacher assessment - marketing

A Level Media Progress Check - Kayleigh
	Assessed by		NSE - Teacher
Focus of assessment		marketing
Relevant assessment criteria		There is excellent research into similar products and a potential target audience.
Evidence of progress/ evidence of meeting criteria		Excellent detail and information shown here, looking at a range of ways that marketing can be influential.Very impressive!
Areas to work on next/ ideas to consider		If you could consider how this might influence your planning ideas for how to market your own star.
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Teacher assessment - Mulvey

A Level Media Progress Check - Kayleigh
	Assessed by		NSE - Teacher
Focus of assessment		Mulvey
Relevant assessment criteria		There is excellent research into similar products and a potential target audience.
Evidence of progress/ evidence of meeting criteria		Clear look into how her theory relates to real videos.
Areas to work on next/ ideas to consider		If you could identify more precise parts of the videos and explain how they prove/disprove the video. Try to also argue against the theory. How will you use this in your own planning?
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