Luna Lux: Draft 2

From daft 1 we haven't changed anything from the first part of the song which is the first verse to the chorus, but we have added more shots to the second verse and the first part of the chorus. We haven't added any major effects to it yet, as we wanted to get all the shots in first  to see what works and what doesn't then when we are happy the effects will go on last, as it will take up a lot of time to keep taking the effects on and off, so we will be wasting time.  To improve what we have I want to get more of the shots on so we have more of a video then to get some feedback to see what our target audience thinks needs improving.